And I stood still for a moment, to slow down the pace,
the swift speed I was in, changed the beauty of stillness,
stillness, which I adored so much,
It endowed me a moment of grace, a moment of purity
and now I feel alive again,
Just now I realized, that it has been a while,
since I last heard the voices, the echos,
of the thousands of expressions within,
and now when I go back again,
into the depth in search of them,
a divine feeling takes over,
and now I feel alive again,
(The meta-emotions of this poetry)
(line 1: the interview of Abhi Subedi is coming in my mind)
(line 2: I see the images of Tinkune while writing this line)
(Line 4, specifically the word PURITY: Leonardo Dicaprio in Basketball diaries comes up)
(Line 5: ….)
(Line 7: pink floyd)
(Line 9: a strong desire to rhyme the paragraph ending takes over)
(Line 11: I don’t know if it’s something I really feel, or my desire to make it sound beautiful)
So, what do you think ?